TheVanillaLog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Bells Collection!]

The animation looked nice, but the lines of some objects/characters looked ugly and jagged. Next time, you should try drawing frames with a 1280 x 720 ratio at least and use bigger brush sizes.

SpinnlesTFox responds:

Thanks for the response! :D I actually experimented with a style on the Line Tool, and used the Meter Join, and the Square Cap.

[Animation Vss Animation Fanmade]

It looks like something that Alan Becker would make, but I do wish that you can focus on something made by you. I can see that you have the potential to make something original.

[Archer Tournament]

That's a pretty good style of animation, dude!

[Sunset Defenders Short: Robo Inferno]

It is a very good video, although it might grab more attention if you change the aspect ratio.

ToastieTV responds:

Thanks dude, I know it's kind of a mess, It's a college film from two years ago and I didn't even consider aspect ratios at the time, I'm currently remaking this and my other projects into a much cleaner project, I hope you stick around to see it!

[Dinosaur Boy Episode 1]

I like this comic-book art style that you're going with this, and the comedy that accompanies the story. Overall, a nice first episode!

TheWhaleAnimation responds:

Thanks! Stay tuned!

[Craziest Aviation Battles - Military History Animated.]

It's very informative, and it did its job to serve its purpose. However, your video seems to be lacking in visuals. If maybe you add more photos of these events, it would have been more eye-catching.

[Fight Scene 2]

This was actually very good! My only criticism against it is that the audio is not that great, but I am nitpicking at this point.

[The Music of Erich Zann]

I think it looks good as a first animated short.

Cthulhuzann responds:

Thanks,
But I'm that guy who always thinks what I do is crap. If you watch the full film I think my own criticisms are valid. And I think I SHOULD criticize myself. Because I want to get better.

I've written and directed other stuff. And while I like some of it I'll always punch myself a little.

Here's my first student film if you are interested:

https://youtu.be/S7Hkk44HvcE