TheVanillaLog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[objects.fla]

Not bad for a first time! However, since i am judging this as a comedy, I would say that it isn't really that funny in my opinion. It is a nice test run on what you can do with adobe animate, but the movies that gave me a lasting impression are the ones that offer more than just good visuals, like quirky jokes or excellent storytelling. Other than that, the animation was spot on and not "floaty" while the characters/objects are simple yet appealing, unlike the other movies in the portal. Good job!

taco360 responds:

Yeah, this was definitely more of a test run than anything. I agree that the humor is definitely the weakest part of this. To be honest, I wasn't sure what kind of genre it fit in, so I just went with comedy.

I really appreciate the feedback, thanks!

[Animation Vss Animation Fanmade]

It looks like something that Alan Becker would make, but I do wish that you can focus on something made by you. I can see that you have the potential to make something original.

[Archer Tournament]

That's a pretty good style of animation, dude!

[Sunset Defenders Short: Robo Inferno]

It is a very good video, although it might grab more attention if you change the aspect ratio.

ToastieTV responds:

Thanks dude, I know it's kind of a mess, It's a college film from two years ago and I didn't even consider aspect ratios at the time, I'm currently remaking this and my other projects into a much cleaner project, I hope you stick around to see it!

[Dinosaur Boy Episode 1]

I like this comic-book art style that you're going with this, and the comedy that accompanies the story. Overall, a nice first episode!

TheWhaleAnimation responds:

Thanks! Stay tuned!

[Craziest Aviation Battles - Military History Animated.]

It's very informative, and it did its job to serve its purpose. However, your video seems to be lacking in visuals. If maybe you add more photos of these events, it would have been more eye-catching.

[Fight Scene 2]

This was actually very good! My only criticism against it is that the audio is not that great, but I am nitpicking at this point.

[The Music of Erich Zann]

I think it looks good as a first animated short.

Cthulhuzann responds:

Thanks,
But I'm that guy who always thinks what I do is crap. If you watch the full film I think my own criticisms are valid. And I think I SHOULD criticize myself. Because I want to get better.

I've written and directed other stuff. And while I like some of it I'll always punch myself a little.

Here's my first student film if you are interested:

https://youtu.be/S7Hkk44HvcE

[IT (2017) Animated Parody JUST SAY NO!!]

This was funny. Even if the animation isn't perfect, I think the low-budget style works on this video.

SourceCodeMT responds:

the thing I screwed up the most was the voice acting, that is main flaw

[Ping-Pong]

I like it! I just think that maybe you should fix the aspect ratio. I know that I'm being a little picky, but it somewhat annoys me. Other than that, good job!

myleshunt responds:

Thank you! This was a first iteration and exploratory feel for the overall look and style that my company, sMyles Creative, LLC., will go into. Will keep exploring and evolving!